Second Draft, Alice’s Poem, Diamond Jubilee

After a couple of months retraining myself to use the writing line, here is my second attempt at the opening poem of “Alice in Wonderland” for your comment and critique. This time, I focused on penmanship and punctuation, and wrote slowly. Please forgive the sub-par photography — I am experimenting with various ways of capturing pen-on-paper to digital media and my efforts are merely aspirational.


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