The Envious Lobster – penmanship critique

I’ve been working on my Gregg for just over a year and with Carlos’ encouragement I’m posting a sample of my current writing.  The text is taken from a collection of poems by Hannah Flagg Gould entitled “The Mother’s Dream”.

Any comments about the shorthand is appreciated, especially if you found a part difficult to read because of the penmanship.

I also recorded this poem amongst a few others for Librivox if you want to read along with audio.  Please try to read without the audio first to catch any penmanship errors though!

Attachment: The_Envious_Lobster_in_Gregg_Shorthand

Audio: http://www.archive.org/download/mothers_dream_1712_librivox/mothersdream_41_gould_128kb.mp3

 


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