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This is a lovely piece to be writing out.
Though I would put a loop at the end of steadily (line 9) – unless it was the more poetic “steady”, and written p-l-IA-d-e-s (diphthong) rather than p-l-E-d-e-s (line 6) – merely a different pronunciation.
I had originally read “steady”, but indeed it is “steadily.” I also noted that I did not write the “left s” of “intense” in line 3.
In the US we pronounce ‘plē-ə-ˌdēz (long e) and since writing the e circle is quicker than the double circle, I wrote it that way. Besides, you were able to read it, right? 🙂
I read “intense” without thinking.
And yes, I read pleiades easily.
Thanks